Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, July 5, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Jack it is me Sree I really liked how you provided so much information for each person.This reminded me from when I was watching a football Game.
ReplyDeleteMaybe Next time you could try not to Cover the people's faces.but I loved it.
Hi Jack & George, what a great collaborative project, I bet you had fun working on this. Perhaps next time try to break the info up into more sentences instead of one big one? I thought some of the information was hilarious and interesting, very diverse - well done buys!
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